Tuesday, October 09, 2012

Preview

Ok, I think that'll do. Click each image to enlarge.















3 comments:

Daniel Pucca said...

First off, let me say that I too hate your guts for doing a great job on such a meaningful story, and finishing it before I finished mine. The writing is very strong and the rhythm is perfect. The inks turned out great. It takes some cajones to render faces with hatching and where you do it, it pays off. You're also now officially a cloud-rendering master. Even your lettering is appealing. You really suck.

If there is anything that is bothering you about this work, rest assured no one else is going to see it. Only spot where I had difficulty was the spread, where I was unsure where to direct my attention after the first 2 panels.

One last thing: if your next comic project isn't in that graywash style you used on the "Could this be god?" panel, you're committing artistic malpractice.

Great job.

Ajani said...

Thank you so much, Daniel. I see what you mean about the spread. I think I'm just going to have to put some sort of note directing the reader to go across the entire top before coming to the bottom.

And looking forward to your finished comic. I'm waiting for my chance to say "you suck", heh.

Kevin said...

i'm not much of a comic critic, i can't think of anything in particular about the comic from a production standpoint. maybe some color? what is grayscale? this would seem a more appropriate question for the other wong brother. i did enjoy reading it though and am glad you made it.